Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Cell phone

Topic : Cell phone
Topic Sentences :
1. Using cell phone while driving can be very dangerous
2. While using cell phone, there are some rules or manners
3. cell phone can also affect the learning process (in school or college)
4. cell phone also change the way we communicate

Cell phone as we know is very important stuff nowadays. But people sometimes don't realize that it also can be a dangerous thing. Using cell phone while driving for example is very dangerous, because we will divide our concentration while driving and talking or communicating. more and more people in the world suffer from car accident because they are using their cell phone while driving.

There are some manners or rules while using cell phone for example you are not allowed to turn on or use your cell phone when you are at the hospital or at the petrol station, because it will disturb the function of the hospital equipment, and the radiation from your cell phone will affect to the gasoline and it is possible that it will blow them up. We are also not allowed to speak in a loud voice in the public because other people may be disturbed.

Cell phone can also affect the learning process, in deed people usually use their cell phone in the class, when their lecturer or teacher is boring. Or they would prefer to communicate with their friends rather than listening to the lecturer.in long period or term, it will slowly but sure affect the score or grade or mark of the student.


Cell phone also change the way people ommunicate nowadays. people used to communicate by mailing or in traditional way, but today there are short message service where it is easier to use rather than mailing. it also fast and not as expensive as mailing. so people seems to forgotten the old way and turn into the new way.


Hendra.W
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1 comment:

Unknown said...

You've gone beyond a single paragraph, but the paper on the whole is good. Some language issues, but that will improve